雅思考试的写作部分如何增强作文的体现里呢？为大家总结了一些技巧

　　1、把句中的表语转换为不同的修饰语。例如：

　　weak: the trees are bare. the grass is brown. the landscape seems drab.

　　revision:the brown grass and bare trees form a drab landscape. (转换为前置定语)

　　or: the landscape, bare and brown, begged for spring green. (转换为并列结构作后置定语)

　　2、将作表语用的形容词或名词变为行为动词。例如：

　　1) weak: the team members are good players.

　　revision: the team members play well.

　　2) weak: one worker's plan is the elimination of tardiness.

　　revision: one worker's plan eliminates tardiness.

　　3、在以“here”或“there”开头的句子中，把“be”动词后的名词代词变成改写句的主语。例如：

　　1) weak: there is no opportunity for promotion.

　　revision: no opportunity for promotion exists.

　　2) weak: here are the books you ordered.

　　revision: the books you ordered have arrived.