老师点评：

    秋怡同学非常有爱心，喜欢小动物。文中对猩猩、长臂猿的描写很精彩，很细致。不足的是，书写有点马虎，草书的签名飞鸟惊蛇，以致老师们差点没认出来啦！

on july 23 we went to singapore and were going to stay there for 9 days.
  on july 26, we saw a lot of animals such as gorillas ,orangutans，lions, white tigers and so on. the most unforgettable thing was the birds show. these birds were very clever and familiar with human beings. if people let them do something, they would never do another thing. so i said they were very smart. these birds could fly very high and show very difficult movements. thus i thought they were smart. they were the soldiers of the sky. the most interesting thing was the pongo stayrus show.the pongo satyrus includes gorilla, orangutan, and gibbon. the gorilla always leaped over our head quickly and others always clapped their hands and jumped over the table. they were cute and very
very clever just as smart as human beings.

  i like singapore because it has many different kinds of animals we have never seen. i think i will lave a wonderful time in singapore. i hope i will have a good time and spend a lot of money in singapore.