上海新东方夏令营总结整理，常见语法错误

        一、句子之间缺少过渡性的单词或词组
　　① salmons swim upstream, they leap over huge dams to reach their destination.
　　② salmons swim upstream, and then they leap over huge dams to reach their destination.
　　二、省字号(')的滥用
　　① the government's plan
　　② the plan of the government
　　三、代词之间的性、数、格不一致
　　① everyone has their homework.
　　② everyone has his (or her) homework.
　　四、主句与从句的顺序不当
　　① some of the new dot-com millionaires found out the party was over, after the nasdaq value dropped by over two thirds.
　　② after the nasdaq value dropped by over two thirds, some of the new dot-com millionaires found out the party was over.
　　五、双重否定
　　① barely no one noticed that the pop star lip-synched during the whole performance.
　　② barely anyone noticed that the pop star lip-synched during the whole performance.
　　六、修饰语、插入语的位置不当
　　① the forest fire, no longer held in check by the exhausted firefighters, jumped the firebreak.
　　② no longer held in check by the exhausted firefighters, the forest fire jumped the firebreak.
　　七、意义含糊的先行词
　　① the band members collected his and her uniforms.
　　② the band members collected their uniforms.
　　八、介词和冠词的滥用
　　① the project of the government reduces the costs of production of the private firms.
　　② the government project reduces the production costs of private firms.
　　九、句子缺少成分
　　① when aiming for the highest returns, and also thinking about the possible losses.
　　② when aiming for the highest returns, investors also should think about the possible losses.
　　十、忘记断句
　　① i do not recall what kind of printer it was all i remember is that it could sort, staple, and print a packet at the same time.
　　② i do not recall what kind of printer it was. all i remember is that it could sort, staple, and print a packet at the same time.

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